The Legends

Prolouge pg.12

February 17th, 2019, 9:54 pm
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Spirit of Water March 4th, 2019, 6:00 pm
If you can, I'd really suggest you find a scanner. I think you're taking pictures with a camera, and as a reader, that's very distracting. The image quality isn't as good, and not only can I see the other panels in the pictures alongside your notations, the other panels and notations distract me so that I start looking at what's going on around your panels instead of your story within the panel.

Why say all of this? Because you have an interesting start of a fantasy story with a very lovely art style that's suited to the story you're trying to tell. You have a lot of potential for this traditionalist story--but it's getting lost in the presentation. It's obvious you've put work into this, but many people won't give it a glance not because it's traditionalist but because it's being uploaded as camera pictures. It makes it look unprofessional. That's why I really suggest you find a scanner. If you don't have one and don't know anyone who has one, there are usually some available publicly, like in libraries or office stores, albeit sometimes for a small fee. But I think the effort will be worth it and give you the best possible chances for your traditional projects if you can find one. Again, you have a very lovely style, and it's sad to see it get lost in camera pictures.